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Day One and Two August 6, 2008

Posted by Bethany Kesler in Writing.
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In the same universe as the Deeping Well short story here

Disclaimer:  The characters belong to Paula, the plot line and stuff is mine.

Day One:

It had been kind of beautiful, he reflected bitterly, had it not been for the fact that he’d had to sit there and watch as one of his oldest and best friends bled and died on Shadow’s Ridge. He’d be buggered if it hadn’t a sight to see, watching her sword flash after enemy and enemy and enemy fell at her feet. It wasn’t long before they had to climb over stacks of bodies to get a chance at trying to bring her down.”What a piece of work is man,” he quoted as he fixated on the screen before him.

They knew, had always known that to get this far would be a miracle. They hadn’t had much a chance to prepare or anything of that sort. They’d carried with them what they had had on them and what they scrounged up from places on the way and the stocks of the command central. He, Matthias had been entrusted with securing the area for Tristan to work his special brand of magic. She’d been left to guard Elle, faithful arms woman that she was. What none of them had counted on were the two girls having to run the gauntlet through the city. M had mustered more numbers than any of them had thought there even existed here in the game. There’d been just enough time for her to shove Elle through the reinforced doors before they descended upon her again. Her sword flashed brightly here and there as the three of them had watched horrorstruck from inside the security of the fortress. Elle had marveled at the skill that Beth showed and it was Matthias who’d answered quietly, “Best student I ever had.”Tristan had turned to his brother in shock, “I never knew that you had showed her how to make a blade dance like that.” Matthias had snorted once, “She hounded me until I did. She was a mite persistent.” Tristan nodded, “That she was.” Elle glared at both of them, “Is. She’ll make it through this.”

Matthias shot a look at the petite girl, the grief and pride warring plain on his face for them to see. “God, I wish that were true, Butterfly. But as good as Spitfire is, and she is good, make no mistake. They have the numbers and she is but one person against so many.” She nodded once, “And there’s no way to get in or out from here.”

Matthias shrugged, “Fortress was designed that way, sweet Butterfly, to protect the lands behind it. To keep the abominations from spreading to the rest of this place.”

“I know that,” she spoke quietly; “I helped design it.” Turning worried eyes back to the screen where she watched her friend, arms woman and sword sister still slashing her way through the hordes of enemies coming straight for her.


Day Two


He felt so hopeless, standing there watching her fight shade after shade after shade. Tristan came up behind him, resting a hand on his shoulder. “She’s getting tired.” He noted, peering at the figure on the screen.

“Yes, it’s not long now,” Matthias was surprised at how level his voice was. Inside, he shook uncontrollably. He didn’t want to watch this, the inevitable slaughter of the single person on the planet that anchored him, that gave him a reason for existing. But on the other hand, he couldn’t tear his eyes away from her figure outlined there on the screen. He couldn’t go to her, but he could stand watch here for her. Be there in spirit if not in body for her. No one should have to die alone. God, watching her was a dream almost. He was so proud that she’d taken what he’d taught her and actually improved on it, made it her own.

“You did good, training her.” Tristan commented, squeezing his shoulder sympathetically. ” She’s better than I am,” Matthias replied with a sad smile. Tristan looked at him quizzically for a minute, “No, no I think you’re actually equals.” He stated as he turned back to watch the screen. ” Which is good because neither one of you could settle for anything less.” Matthias laughed bitterly, “And what good does that do us now? I am here and she is there and I would for all the world that it was me there in her place.”Tristan didn’t say anything, just squeezed his brother’s shoulder one more time before leaving him to his vigil.

Elle brought him a cup of spice drink and he gulped it down eagerly. “Thank you,” he spoke quietly as he sat there, staring at his hands. ” How is he? Your brother, I mean?” She asked him. Tristan rubbed a hand over his face, “Matthias won’t stir from that spot until it’s all over. She’s getting tired and soon she’ll start to slip up and make mistakes and the second that starts to happen…it’ll be a lucky shot or her miss-stepping and falling to the ground that’ll do her in and with her, will go my brother. What’s left of him, that is.” Elle shook her head, “Run that by me again, Tris?”

Tristan let out a sharp bark of laughter at the confused look on her face, “Matthias and Beth….it’s complicated. She’s the one; she’s always been the one for him. My brother in his own twisted way has from the day they met always, looked out for and cared for Beth. Both of them knew on a deeper level, I suppose you’d call it, that they’d eventually end up together, but they had to go through a lot of grief before either one was able to really accept that fact for fact.” Tristan sat back in his chair, “He loved her for the longest time until she left him that first time and then when she came back, it was like they were two completely different people. I had one hell of a time dealing with the two of them then.”

“But if….-”

“Like I said before Elle, it’s complicated. But no matter how my brother felt afterwards about her leaving him, he couldn’t just send her away. She’s just far too important to him; she’s in essence, what keeps him together, what keeps him tied to this earth. My greatest fear was always that one day like tonight we’d lose her.”

“Because you’ll be losing one of your oldest friends.”

“No, because when we lose her, I won’t just have lost a friend, I’ll have lost my brother as well. Matthias, as much as he loves me, wouldn’t stay here just for me. But he’d stay for her.” Tristan spoke, mingled bitterness and grief in his voice. ” She dies and the best part of my brother will go with her and there’ll be nothing left but the madness for him, which will kill him. He knows it too.” Tristan’s voice broke on a muffled sob. “And as good as I am, Elle, I can’t protect you half as well as they can. So my dream comes true. It wasn’t supposed to be like this!” Elle ran in to embrace him as he cried.

Meanwhile, back in the master control room, the shadow man smiled as he watched the chaos unfolding. Tapping out a few commands quickly, he hit enter and then left for the day, whistling to himself, pleased with the way the experiment was turning out, unexpected variables and all.

The Deeping Well August 6, 2008

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Disclaimer and Author’s notes:

I played with characters created by my lovely friend Paula, who came up with this bizarre and fascinating little world that I’m thoroughly addicted to. She’s given me her complete permission to do so. This is a piece at the beginning of said universe, a sort of in-between scene happening between the first few chapters. It also is from a point of view not specifically seen in the beginning of the story. I sweat blood try to get this into a format that my teacher liked. My first three attempts were 1) too long, 2) too cliché, 3) too confusing, and 4) looks more like a proposal for an actual novel rather than a short story in and of itself. So here it is I present you with what is in my mind known as the finalbloodydraftthankthegraciousLord. I’ve always been fascinating by the things of Faerie and the Deeping Well is one of them and I thought that given the mix of mechanical and magical that Paula writes about, this little scene would fit in quite well.

The Deeping Well

Tristan sighed; it had been a difficult day. Another one of their candidates had died today. This was the third candidate that they had lost in a month. Something was wrong, either with the Game or with the girls they were using to test it out. None of them were lasting farther than the first level of the game. There was also something off with the process of entering them into the Game. It was simple really, once the candidate was deemed fit enough physically, they were placed in the stasis tube with a crystal cover. Matthias, upon seeing them had christened them coffins, and Tristan had to admit the status tubes did resemble coffins after a fashion. The tubes helped to sustain and monitor the candidate’s vital information while they were ‘inside’ the Game, so to speak.

When a candidate failed, that is to say, died inside the game, the coffins turned black. No amount of any medical assistance could wake them up again. He’d tried. After the first few, he’d realized it was futile. So was trying to talk to his brother or Mr. M, their mysterious benefactor about possibly entering some safety features into the programming code of the Game. He couldn’t do what his brother and the mysterious Mr. M did, lump the girls they used as human test subjects together in the same category as the white lab rats they’d used for their preliminaries. Yes, their work was important, and yes, they were on the verge of a ground-breaking new discovery, and yes, he like his brother would do just about anything to keep it going; but still the same, the deaths bothered him in a way he couldn’t quite define.

He’d tried adding some other non-player characters into the Game, to help take some of the burden off of the candidates, but even that had its limits. So much depended on the candidates themselves, the Game was invented initially to study people’s dreams and how they would react if they were thrust into a world not dissimilar to the ones in their dreams. It was fascinating to see some of the unusual facets that some people had dreamed up. They’d gotten enough information in their initial trials to have a working prototype that adjusted to each different candidate. With each new candidate, more variables were added in, and the Game’s overall performance was upgraded. The screening process was highly selective, only females within a certain age bracket and only the ones who were vivid dreamers. That point was critical, for it was only the dreamers that had imaginations fertile enough for the Game to work with.

They’d just gotten a new candidate in and she looked to be one of the most promising yet. Candidate Twenty-Six, name: Lilith also known as Elle, age: fifteen years old, he typed into the program in front of him. Matthias and Mr. M were ecstatic with Elle’s progress so far. They planned to implement a new trial for Elle in the morning; she’d done so well against the monsters and demons that they’d thrown at her so far. This one was a bit different from the others, however, called the Experientia Dolore or Trial of Pain, if you cared to translate it from the Latin. It triggered some of the pain receptors in the brain, causing the candidate to feel varying levels of pain throughout one or two cycles inside the Game. It was a totally new feature and before he finished imputing it into the Game’s programming, he wanted to run a few tests on it.

Tristan set the Game into standby mode and opened a different program; one that he doubted that Mr. M or even his brother knew existed. It was his own personal side project, a sort of testing ground for the Game. He called it the Deeping Well after some of the stories and old myths he’d heard as a child in the orphanage. It was a program he’d created to show him possible scenarios from the data that he’d entered into it, the various variables and such. In this case, Elle and her possible reactions to the Experientia Dolore, because while he did halfway understand why M wanted to implement it, to see how far they could go, to push the limits of both the candidate and the Game, he didn’t want to see Elle end up like so many others had before her. He also wanted to see what would happen if he interfered in the Game against his brother and their benefactor’s wishes, if it did indeed come to that. He suspected it might and in that case, it would be better to be as prepared as he could be. Cautiously he looked around, making sure that no one was around before attaching the small headset he’d brought with him to the computer and entering into the program himself.

Elle scrubbed at her sword, wiping the blood stains off of it. This last battle had been something fierce and she’d only just made it through. She really needed to find some place where she could hole up safely for the night, take care of that wound of hers and maybe gets a few hours of uninterrupted sleep. Time was rather fluid here in the Game, but she sensed that something big was approaching. She wasn’t quite sure if she would make it through this time. She’d only barely made it through last time and that’d been with Beth’s help. She didn’t know where the petite blonde had gone to, she’d disappeared after killing the monster. It didn’t help that she was still dreaming, even here inside the Game. It was dangerous to dream here, because your dreams had an eerie way of manifesting inside of the Game, almost as if the Game had a direct line to your subconscious. If she slept, she’d dream and the dreams of her death were still the most prevalent out of all her dreams. Finding a small enclave big enough to fit her, she unrolled her sleeping bag and crawled inside of it. Tomorrow would bring another day, another fight, hopefully another win, she told herself, but the growing pain all over her body seemed to counteract any positive outlook she might have. Deep inside, she knew that she couldn’t handle too much more of this.

Pain, pain there was so much pain. It hurt so much just to bleeding breathe, much less fight. But she had no choice because if she didn’t fight then no one else would and this monster would terrorize others. She’d seen what some of the other monsters had done to some of the villages they’d encountered and it sickened her. All that blood, all that carnage, all those innocents slaughtered all for one man’s psychotic game. She screamed as one of the monster’s talons ripped across her back and as she fell to the ground, the last thing she saw before losing consciousness was a pair of concerned green eyes looking straight back at her.

Tristan shakily pulled the headset off, the Deeping Well program had projected for him the most likely scenario based off of the data he’d fed it and he did not like the outcome. He’d also seen what had happened if he interfered with the process. In one, M killed both Elle and Matthias before finally putting Tristan out of his own misery. In another, Elle lived, but not for long. Even escaping into the Game itself and using it against Matthias and M had only bought them a scant amount of time. Each scenario the program had projected for him had ended in death, either his or Elle’s.

Rubbing a hand across his tired eyes, he caught a glimpse of the digital clock blinking at him from the wall.  01:05 a.m. it read in bright red numbers, no wonder he was so exhausted, he’d been up for almost twenty-four hours straight. Putting everything into standby mode for the time being, he stiffly stood and shuffled off to his cot in the corner. He’d figure out what to do in the morning. He’d seen only projections, possible futures, nothing was certain yet. As he closed his eyes, sleep overtook him and wiped the conflicting visions from his brain.